I'd like to know what people think of my poem, please.?

I have to read this stuff for a living and the truth is that this is cr.p. Throw it in the bin and do something else. you will never be what you think you are. Some people can write two words and I can see they are good and I p them on and others could write a book and they are rubbish. Nobody else is going to tell you the truth but believe me you just hav.nt got it.